They were supposed to go to Grandma’s for Thanksgiving, but the blizzard came in fast. The wind howled. The tree creaked.
Papa stockpiled wood inside the burrow. He stomped his feet and bolted the door.
Papa looked at his shivering brood of three. “I know you are disappointed, but we are safer in our burrow.”
“What about Grandma’s acorn pie, ” asked Sammy. His pudgy cheeks quivered and is large glossy eyes brimmed with tears.
“We have plenty of nuts, berries, fruit, seeds and grains to feast upon,” said Mama. “Why don’t you do your chores. Be thankful that we’re together.”
Sammy, Teddy and Rose tidied up their nests and swept the burrow. Sammy wondered what they could do to make Thanksgiving special.
Then Sammy spied a twig resting against the wall inside the burrow.
“Hey Teddy and Rose, I have an idea,” said Sammy. The three siblings huddled and whispered. Rose jumped up and down. The rest of the morning they worked in a corner of the burrow on their idea.
Mama worked all morning preparing their feast. Papa tended to the fire so that the burrow remained warm.
Sammy carefully placed their centerpiece on the table.
“It’s beautiful!” Mama gasped.
“It’s our thankful tree,” beamed Sammy. Tied to the branches were acorns, pine cones, and dried leaves bearing the names, Mama, Papa, Grandma, Sammy, Teddy and Rose.
They heard a rustle in the tunnel and a voice called out, “Acorn pie anyone?”
“Grandma,” they chirped. “We’re thankful you’re here!”
Susanna Leonard Hill is sponsoring a Thanksgiving Writing Contest. Here are the rules: Post your 250 (or fewer) word kids’ Thanksgiving story, beginning with “They were supposed to go to Grandma’s for Thanksgiving, but the blizzard came in fast…” and add your link to the link list. The last day to submit is November 24th! Add your own entry at http://susannahill.blogspot.com/2011/11/oh-excitement-thanksgiving-contest.html.
Copyright (c) 2011, Patricia Howe Tilton, All Rights Reserved
Pat, this is fantastic! I love it! It’s so fun to see how everyone starts in the same place and comes up with such wonderful, creative stories 🙂 Thanks for joining the fun!
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Susanna, thank you! I had fun! It is fun to see how each story is very different.
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Pat, this is a wonderful story and entry! Hope you have a Happy Thanksgiving!
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Thank you Maeve. Wishing you a Happy Thanksgiving!
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What a beautiful story Pat, I love it. Heres hoping you have a Happy Thanksgiving, with family and friends.
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Diane, this was fun. Wrote it in a matter of a couple of hours. Good exercise. Teleseminar tonight! – Pat
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Yea! Grandma came! Love the story Pat, and the illustrations would be adorable!
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Thank you Cathy. I had no idea what I was going to write — just let the characters take over. Fun exercise! Happy Thanksgiving! – Pat
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Pat, that is adorable! I think you should turn it into a pb.
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Thank you Catherine. Have added it to my PiBoIdMo list. I had fun with the exercise! Happy Thanksgiving! – Pat
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That was absolutely delightful! Good for you!
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Thanks Beth. This was a fun exercise. – Pat
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That was so cute! I loved it 🙂
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Jennie, it was so kind of you to stop and leave a remark. Thank you. – Pat
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Pat this was very enjoyable and sweet.
Thanks for stopping by my blog today 🙂
Happy Thanksgiving to you too!
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Thank you Jennifer. Iam glad you enjoyed my last minute entry. It was fun and a great exercise. Enjoyed your blog today. – Pat
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This is so cool! I would have NEVER thought to make the story about animals! Very cool!
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Erik, thank you for leaving a comment on my story. I’ve never written about animals before, and for some reason I saw this story as an animal story. You never know what will inspire you! I enjoyed reading yours very much. You write so well! — Pat
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We should all have “thankful trees!” Glad to meet you via the contest. Wishing you a Happy Thanksgiving!
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Thank you Julie. I am happy to meet you. Will have to check out your blog. Happy THanksgiving! – Patricia
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I love how we don’t know for sure which animal it is! And am so glad grandma makes it with her acorn pie! Great story, Pat.
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Thanks Joanna. First animal story I’ve written. Good exercise for me. – Pat
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What a cute story, Pat. The acorn pie made me smile =D
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Thank you Ruth. The contest was fun and a great exercise in economy of words. Pat
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Pat, your story showed genuine warmth and family love, which for me is always what Thanksgiving is about. The ending made me a bit teary-eyed – but I loved it – because when the storm is too bad for the family car to venture out, leave it to a tough and resourceful older woman to figure out a way through! Her priorities are definitely in order!
I’ve also enjoyed browsing the rest of your blog – terrific book reviews. I’ll be back! 🙂
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Thank you. I enjoyed your story in verse — very well done. Thank you for taking a moment to view my blog. I appreciate it very much. – Pat
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Pat, this is darling! That sound so warm and cozy in their burrow – it makes me want to curl up in a blanket and enjoy the story again! Great job 🙂
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Abby, thank you for your kind comments — like the warm and cozy. It was great fun seeing all the different entries. Your verse was beautiful! – Pat
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Pat I came back here to let you know I have memed you. (forgot to put who I passed it on to, on my blog).
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Great story, Patricia. While I wait for the bird to bake and family to arrive thought I’d stop in and see what you “cooked up”. Love it. Gives me more ideas of what to be thankful for today.
Happy Thanksgiving!
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Clar, how sweet of you to take time to stop by. Thank you! Happy Thanksgiving! – Pat
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